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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 22, 2015 18:19:19 GMT -5
ooc: As I said, the last one you posted. It may not have changed anything about Mith, but it did reveal more of Shard's character. Of course that trust that was lost will need to be rebuild as well now.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 22, 2015 18:21:35 GMT -5
Oh ok.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 22, 2015 18:25:30 GMT -5
ooc: It's your post.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 22, 2015 18:32:13 GMT -5
I'm still thinking how to do this
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 7:36:41 GMT -5
ooc: What are you struggling with?
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 8:24:28 GMT -5
How should Forge be acting. He just pretty gave up his life's meaning in essence and I'm not sure how to write that level of depression.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 8:31:05 GMT -5
Although his personality is gonna drop visibly
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 11:15:28 GMT -5
ooc: Just start by showing him depressed and silent, work up from there. Once you established one layer of depression you can build another one in another post. If Forge is unable to fix this himself then Mag is going to have to help him, there's no other way. Also, you shouldn't use such an extreme level of depression for something so superficial. Let him be depressed, but don't take it too far. And take the same time you used for his depression to get him back on his feet. If you take it too far then it's going to take longer to bring him back.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 11:41:26 GMT -5
Ooc: In Forge ' s eyes this isn't superficial. Which presents a unique problem. And even if Ever apologizes he still will have like his purpose of life nullified. Although he will consider himself an equal being. Right now he thinks he is less entitled to be alive because he allowed them to get away with manipulating him.(in his eyes)
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 11:42:14 GMT -5
How do I roleplay someone who doesn't feel he is entitled to exist... actually I got an idea now.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 11:47:25 GMT -5
Shard flew up and saw Forge and Mag. Shard saw Forge was down but what really unnerved her was the emptiness in his eyes. Like his soul was gone." Mag looked at Shard. "This is not a good time. I can't even take to time to explain the symbolism of the mark on his back. You just need to leave. I'll make sure he comes down." Mag said gravely. Shard wanted to say something but looked at Forge. She could tell even if she didn't understand the reasoning that something had happened. She simply frowned and flew to a nearby branch and went to sleep. Mag stared at Forge and watched every little movement...
Ooc: Want to do morning or you got anything?
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 12:29:58 GMT -5
ooc: That's why I'm saying YOU shouldn't take it that far. By your explanation all three the girls should feel worse than Forge since they've all been manipulated and bullied. And with Ever's background she should feel a million times as if she shouldn't exist (and in a way she does feel that all the time). But they lean on each other to help them get through it, which is what Forge is suppose to do with Mag. This, how he is suppose to be acting through your description, just shows that his ego is so big that this event has destroyed his whole life. I'm going to say it plain and simple. Forge isn't humble, not in the slightest. He's the most not humble guy to ever exist in this forum. And he needs a huge dose of humble pie until he's bloated by being humbled. The day Forge is humbled is the day Ever and he'll be able to see eye to eye. Also you can go to the next morning, I don't have anything for the night.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 12:46:45 GMT -5
Ooc: okay. How would you suggest humbling him?
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 16:57:26 GMT -5
ooc: There has been many times Forge could have been humbled throughout the rp, but it's you that needs to let him realize that his pride has played a part in the things that has happened to him and that he must accept his blame with humility. But remember, the higher the pride the harder it is for him the realize this, even though it's much easier for him to get humiliated. And you're setting that pride bar pretty high. For now you can concentrate on Forge's depression, we'll get to him actually learning from this in due time, I hope. Now, next morning.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 17:00:14 GMT -5
ooc: On a side note, the lower the pride the harder it is to be humiliated. Ever wonder why ever can do the things she does without getting humiliated. She is at an opposite bad from Forge where she has no pride or respect for herself.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 17:37:56 GMT -5
Shard flew down and said. "Rise and shine everypony!" Mag took Forge down. Forge himself had a noticeable change in his demeanor. He said nothing but put out the fire. His empty eyes were incredibly striking. Mag flew onto his back. "Anyone know where the next campsite is?" Shard asked hoping Forge would answer. "Yeah. It's a while down the nearby valley. It's tough territory but predators stay away." Forge said. "I checked the map last night." His voice was hoarse but he seemed healthy enough. (He was crying.)
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 17:53:11 GMT -5
"Good morning everypony." Tornado said getting out of the tent. She was looking a bit blue and wasn't her usually chirpy self. When she saw Forge her ears drooped a bit. Mith came out, looking like she always do. However Ever came out looking cheerful and fresh. "Good morning Shard." She greeted her and completely ignored Forge and Mag, not even looking towards them and started on taking down the tent instead.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 17:59:20 GMT -5
Shard looked at Ever. "Good morning Ever." She said. She noticed Tornado. "Are you alright?" Shard asked. This was strange. At least she had a faint idea of why Forge was sad but Tornado...
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 18:09:05 GMT -5
"Yeah." Tornado answered, although she obviously wasn't alright. "Did you sleep alright Shard?" Ever asked her as she finished with the tent.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 18:36:46 GMT -5
"No. I didn't. But the Princess asked us to do a mission and I intend to see it through." Shard said simply. Shard check the map... an idea hit her. "These routes are too steep and small for all of us to go at once on the same path. So we should split into three groups of two. Ever and Mith take the left route. Me and Tornado will take middle. And Forge and Mag will take the right route. Okay?"
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 23, 2015 18:48:06 GMT -5
"That's fine with me." Ever told Shard. A rather strange reaction that she would agree so easily to splitting up. Mith rolled her eyes and took an iron peg out of her bag which she gave to Tornado. "Here, use this if you get into trouble, it'll be loud enough for us to hear."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 23, 2015 19:02:21 GMT -5
"Alright with me." Mag said. Forge merely said, "Predators might still be around." Shard nodded. "Noted. Let's get moving as soon as we finish up breakfast." Shard said.
Ooc: Wanna skip?
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 24, 2015 0:21:09 GMT -5
After the three packed up and had breakfast they were standing ready to leave. Ever looked like a ray of sunshine between the sullen party, one that never fell one Forge.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 24, 2015 8:37:23 GMT -5
Forge and Mag were packed. Shard cleared her throat. "Okay well you all know the routes I'm talking about. I'll see you at camp. Come on Tornado." Shard said. Forge and Mag went on their own way.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 24, 2015 9:12:20 GMT -5
Ever and Mith went their way and Tornado followed after Shard. "Isn't it kinda dangerous to split up?" She asked the other pegasus.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 24, 2015 9:58:14 GMT -5
"After what happened we all need a break. Are you feeling alright?" Shard asked. "You seem more sullen then the others."
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 24, 2015 11:13:01 GMT -5
"Actually Ever and Mith is feeling pretty bad as well." Tornado told Shard. "But I kinda feel this is all my fault." She sighed. "So you split us up on purpose?"
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 24, 2015 11:30:21 GMT -5
"Yeah. I wanted to ask you something. Why do you think this your fault? Did you do anything?" Shard asked.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 24, 2015 15:59:00 GMT -5
"I'm the one who wanted to join this team." Tornado told her. "Ever and Mith only joined because of me. If I hadn't joined all this wouldn't have happened. And if I didn't think I may have a thing for Forge when we first met, then he wouldn't have been hurt by Ever. And if I didn't try to make things right between Forge and Ever then he wouldn't have told me what Ever did and hurt her, so that Mith had to step in and do what she did."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 25, 2015 15:11:34 GMT -5
"Tornado. I'm going to tell you something. And you have to trust me when I tell you ok?" Shard said.
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