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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 9, 2013 6:10:13 GMT -5
City next to the sea with large brick skyscrapers and an industrial feel.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 9, 2013 6:20:53 GMT -5
Raziel was slowly climbing up one of the buildings, looking into the empty world where only shadows of all the living could be seen. The pony escaped him again! He couldn't believe it. It was already hard enough chasing after her, but now she's gotten even more devious at escaping. He phased back into the real world, bracing himself as the buildings straitened out from their crooked likeness in the spirit world. He jumped onto the roof of the building as it moved by him and into the air. When he was back in the real world he again scanned around the city, looking for the bright purple coat between the citizens of Manehattan that would give away his target.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 9, 2013 13:26:25 GMT -5
OOC: just a quick OOC post in this thread so I can quickly see if someone posts in here.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 9, 2013 13:48:06 GMT -5
ooc: I forgot to put enough info about the spirit world, so I'm just going to post a little more about it.
Raziel scanned through the crowds of ponies. He was able to shift in and out of the spirit world, a place between life and death, where only the spirits and monsters that feed of souls can enter. If he was killed in the real world he would only phase back into the spirit world, never truly being able to die, if what he was could be called living. Even the spirits that created him, giving him this ability, didn't realize that even they wouldn't be able to kill him. But that was all in the past. Now Raziel preserved the boundaries of the spirit world, keeping the horrors who reside there from feeding off the souls of the living as well as the dead. It's ironic that he became the keeper of the spirit world, just like his old masters wanted, but this time it was his choice and not theirs.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 10, 2013 1:24:25 GMT -5
A tall man walked around Manehattan wearing really only a brown tophat and trenchcoat over his suit which was red and black at his sides two handguns and on his back two swords. "What a beautiful moonsky," he said looking up, "Kinda makes you want to have a bite to drink." he paused for a few seconds before he couldn't maintain his composure "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA that crazy Alucard and his sick one liners how does he even get away with them!" he wiped a tear from his eye as he walked down the street and turned down an alleyway. Meanwhile in a private investigators office, *RiNg RiNg* This Pony ( i1149.photobucket.com/albums/o588/Terin_DAmico/Lucy_zpsb876f012.jpg) answers the phone, "Hello, this is the office of Private investigators Lyra and Bon Bon how may I help you?" she took notes as the other pony said her piece. "uhu, ok, ok, yeah. Sounds good I'll notify them right away, so long." She hung up the phone and knocked on the door with a large opaque glass over window in front so you couldn't see through it, "Come in" She walked in making her way to the desk on the other side of the room. On a long couch Lyra was sitting a bubble pipe in her mouth and her hat pulled down over the eyes exposing only her nose. her hooves were behind her head and one back leg was crossed over the other bouncing to some beat in her head. Bon Bon was sitting at the desk signing paperwork and reviewing case files. "Somepony just called saying they saw Deadpool walkign the streets again. They were going to expedite a Photo to us they got of him. Just then a knock came to the door and a manila envelope was slipped under the door. Lucy went over and picked up the foulder opening it a picture fell out. Deadpool was posing with some random pony who obviousley didn't want to be there holding up the peace sign with his left hand and holding the colt close with his right smileing brightly into the camera. "Obviousley! He's mocking us because he knows we havn't bagged him yet" Lyra said already in a bad mood when it came top Deadpool. Lyra looked over the picture and noticed a familiar site, "Hey I know this resurant, *she pointed to the background of the picture* "This is thai chinese store on the corner down the street. He might still be in the area." "We're headed out" Lyra said putting on her coat and running out the door, Bon Bon sighed and did the same "We'll be back later don't lock up till we get back ok?" "OK" Lucy said as they ran out the door.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 10, 2013 4:47:24 GMT -5
A purple pony bumped into Deadpool as he entered the alleyway. "Sorry Sir!" The pony said taking a step back, she had a dark purple mane and her cutie mark was a strawberry with grapes. There was a beautiful leg band clasp around her front leg, it was silver and figures that looked like wolfs with golden eyes ran all around it. She looked frightened out of her wits as she stared at the intimidating figure of Deadpool.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 10, 2013 8:03:29 GMT -5
Deadpool smiled picked her up kicked a sewer grate and jumped down entering a small area that neither smelled or looked foul appearing like a dignified englishmans place with books lining one wall and a cushiony broze chair with red cushions in the center next to a bronze table nothing on it. Deadpool unfolded a metal chair and sat down pulling out one of his pistols, spinning it on his finger before grasping it firmly in his hand and pointing it at the purple pony he brought with him. "Ponies with jewelry dont run anywhere unless it's stolen or someone more powerful wan't it for themselves... So what may I ask is the name of our mysterious friend and what's with that charm?" he gestured to the armband.
Lyra and Bon Bon had made it to the street corner where the picture was taken and they looked around for any sign of him, "I think we lost him" Bon Bon said walking over to Lyra. "Shoot! *she kicked a soda can with some force* and I was sure we'd catch him here, What about the Chinese store? did Mr. Ling see anyone?" "Yeah, he said he saw a tall dark figure wearing what appeared to be a treanchcoat walking down the street a little before dissappearing." "Then let's go and get him! he can't have getton far." Lyra took off down the street Bonb Bon had pointed towards, Bon Bon shook her head for a second then followed in turn.
OOC: Just a little background, This area underground is actually a section of the demon plane brought to this world in place of another section of real world. It was created by Alucard, hens the chair and table, and Deadpool uses it because any form of tracking doesn't work there but if you enter the demon world and track fro mthere. It's almost like the demon plane is there only in appearence but still remains in the demon plane. I would describe it better but I got's to go to skool. I'm not sure how the spirit plane works in relation to the other planes or if being in the demon plane preven't you from seeing into the spirit plane f the demon plane or it there is simply one spirit plane and not one for every plane individually but my intention is that being here preven't all form of long range tracking. Via Raziels spirit tracking or lojack on a car once it enteres this space it almost exsists in both plane and at the same time neither plane not putting out a trackable signal. Alucard can move the location of his little lair at will but Deadpool just moved in one day so he can't move it.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 10, 2013 9:40:24 GMT -5
Ooc: The spirit plane has its whole existence link up with the history of the world in Legacy of Kain, and I honestly don't remember much about it. But here I'm simplifying it and making it more accessible to the other worlds. Think about it like this: All the monsters and people, both in the normal and demon world must have some kind of spirit to be able to live, even undead like zombies need some form of power to move. The spirit world is a plane where the spirit of all living things pass through, like a filter. it's a place where spirits go to wherever they are bound, kind of a safe place to protect them. Only conscious spirits like Discord is able to enter the plane as well as monsters that feed on spirits. Raziel is able to enter the spirit world as well as absorb the essence that the spirits leave behind. His Soulreaver blade which, through a lot of confusing storytelling, is he himself, can absorb spirits and destroy them if he wish.
Raziel landed in the street in front of the two detectives and quickly disappeared down an alley.
When Deadpool pointed the gun at the purple pony her expression changed, form frightened to pleasantly amused as a smile formed on her face. "Oh, this little thing." She tapped the trinket around her leg. Just earning a living. Nothing a big, bad man like yourself would be interested in." Suddenly she was at the bookcase going through the books one by one, she didn't move, she didn't teleport, she was just there, as if she was standing there all along. "The name's Hidden Berry, call me Berry." She said.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 10, 2013 22:00:15 GMT -5
"Who was that?" Lyra said startled when the strange man ran across them "Was it Deadpool?" "No, but honestly how many humans are there in Manehattan like four? *She checked her watch and placed it where the man landed on the ground* The Sensor says it's Raziel, He's a Level 10 Undead!" "He must be in cahoots with Deadpool! He looked like he was headed somewhere with perpose." Lyra ran after him down the alley "Jeeze headstrong without a hint of perseption jumping into situations without knowing the whole thing." Bon Bon followed behind lyra at a walk keeping her distance to act as surveilence for information gathering before jumping into the fray.
'This is obviousley not a normal pony' he thought to himself, his gun pointed at air. "And how does Ms. Berry earn her living eh?"
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 11, 2013 1:33:56 GMT -5
"Oh, you can say I'm a professional tourist." Berry said casually. "I go places and earn money. Are any of these valuable?"
Raziel stopped at a dead end. He was sure he felt something strange around here, something out of place.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 11, 2013 12:44:05 GMT -5
Deadpool put his gun away. "It's obviouse I can't shoot you but be warned that these arn't my books or my chair I'm just house sitting for master alucard who is indesposed at the moment and he won't have any trouble catching you if you take them. I just keep things dusted off." He pulled out a folding chair and sat down watching the purple pony carefully.
Lyra caught up to Raziel and stood across from him at the alleyway. "You There! What are you doing slinking around these part!?!" She yelled at him, Bon Bon stood a good distance away and watched from behind the croud.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 11, 2013 13:42:56 GMT -5
"I've dealt with vampires before." Berry said. "But even vampires can't see the darkness in the shadows, like most they can only hide in them." She said stalking around Deadpool's chair for dramatic effect while she said it. "What about food? Got anything edible?" She walked to the fridge and opened it.
Raziel spun around a sword of light materializing from his arm. When he saw the pony the sword disappeared and he threw what looked like a cloth over his shoulder, covering his mouth and nose, hiding the missing part of his lower jaw. Although it looked like a ragged cloth it was in fact his broken wings that he used to cover him. "I'm looking for a pony, a thief." He told Lyra.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 11, 2013 15:03:35 GMT -5
"Meh, I don't care but I wouldn't touch the books anyway. Alucard is everything and nothing as he likes to say and does this same jumping thing you do but alas I can't shoot or stab you so I give up however I feel your going to bring all sorts of trouble with you." He sat back and watched as his living arangments were rummaged through.
"I've heard nothing of a theaving pony and I'm not a cop. We thought you might know of a Deadpool. He's a clinical Psychotic and very powerful. He's also a wanted Vigilante who's seriousley injured many people and ponies alike have you seen him?"
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 11, 2013 15:58:04 GMT -5
"Jumping?" Berry said as she took a juice out of the fridge. "I'm just very good at being places where I want to be or not being where I don't want to be. Some people get too hanged up on the details. How about you? Do you always take in ponies off the street?"
"Deadpool?" Raziel asked. "What does he look like?"
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 11, 2013 17:20:43 GMT -5
"Do I look like one who cares" He fired an empty dart towards the fridge wondering if he could land a hit.
"This is him here" Lyra handed the strange man a picture they got in the mail where he is poseingnext to a random colt who obviousley didn't want to be there. "Our sources say he has been seen running down this alleyway."
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 11, 2013 17:43:07 GMT -5
The dart hit the fridge next to Berry who casually took a sip from the juice. "It's not that you can't hit me, you know?" She said. "It's just that you're too distracted to know where to shoot." She took another sip. "So, you look like a guy that knows where things can get lost and I'm looking to get lost. I'm usual good at not being found, but the guy that's after me can be a bit stubborn to lose. Know where the smuggling routes are? I can make it worth your while."
"In this alley you say?" Raziel said looking at the picture. "I felt something here, something out of place. Give me a second to check something." He handed the photo back and phased into the spirit world. He disappeared before Lyra and she before him as the buildings warped and bended to the will of the spirit realm. He could feel it closer now, the spirit world bending around something that was hidden, if he could get closer to it he could find it.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 11, 2013 19:55:22 GMT -5
Bon Bon ran up When the tall man dissappeared from in front of Lyra "What happened here?" Lyra was looking around suprised, "I don't know he just dissapeared. he said he was going to check something and just dissappeared." She started reaching for her flank, her hoof hovering over her cutie mark. Bon Bon stopped Lyra hitting her hoof out of the way. "Remember talk first." Lyra just pouted as they waited for Raziel to show back up.
"It's also that the fridge is the only thing down here I own and I wouldn't dare shoot in the direction of Master Alucards stuff." He said getting up and pulling a soda pop out of the fridge. "No, I don't know smugling routes, when I want to go unseen i shoot my persuer with various tranquilizers since most don't mean harm. I like Manehattan, it's quaint and lot's of people try and destroy things here. It's the only thing that offers any serenity to my brain."
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 12, 2013 3:31:03 GMT -5
Raziel phased back into the real world in front of Lyra and Bon Bon. He gave an inquiring look towards the other pony now standing there before continuing. There is something out of place in this alley, I sense it, but I'm not sure where it is. I'll need to get closer."
"This fridge is the only thing you own?" Berry asked. "Sheesh! You must be dirt poor. Never could stand to use guns and weapons, it distracts me, makes me slow. Besides, bullets and tranqs wont work on this guy." Berry finished her drink and threw the juice box on the floor. "Well, I need to get into the underground. So, whatever, right?"
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 12, 2013 12:50:30 GMT -5
"They are just my weapons of choice. And who's this guy you speak of? I already know they won't work on Master Alucard." Deadpool said picking up the juice box and sitting it in his back pocket. "Well this alley leads to a dead end so maybe they are hiding in here somewhere?" Bon Bon said walking past Raziel and further down the alleyway. "There are only so many hiding spots." Lyra started running ahead of them both looking in trashcans and through windows. OOC: I'm sure this story will pick up eventually we tend to start off pretty slow from what I saw in the unknown plain thread took us a few pages to really get into the story
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 12, 2013 15:50:39 GMT -5
ooc: I have the main direction I want the story to go in alright, but the rest is all up in the air. We have to create the atmosphere, we need to put an extra spin on this that our characters need to deal with that's not part of their main focus. Something that will create unlikely salience and untimely backstabbings. I was thinking we should take this down the New York gangster type story route. In other words: We need something to be smuggled and I have no idea what. Most people go for booze smuggling, but I don't want that and gun running is out of the question, so we need something unique.
BIC: Raziel looked at the ponies searching and decided he'd take another look in the spirit realm. After phasing into it he climbed up on the building to get a better look at the allay. As he searched the alley something caught his eye. It was the ground lifted up in a sphere and pulsing, a manhole cover right in the middle of it. He knew now why he had mist it, it was in the alley behind this one. He jumped of the roof and phased back into the real world. "We're in the wrong alley." He told the two detectives. "It's the one on the other side."
"Hay if I know." Berry told Deadpool. "But he really wants to get his trinket back, but I'm not about to give it up. It has some interesting tricks that suits me better." She touched the trinket and vanished before Deadpool's eyes. In the spirit realm Berry show the room expanding out far beyond the walls, into a sphere and spikes coming out of the walls pointing inwards. Berry quickly phased back into the real world, suddenly livid. "What kind of place is this, you idiot? It's like a big come get me sign, he's sure to see it!"
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 13, 2013 8:31:59 GMT -5
"We'll meet you over there then." Bon Bon Called up to Raziel. and the twoponies made a dash for the next alley over. "Why are you being so cooperative?" Lyra said annoyed. "Because he's being cooperative, no need to start something unessesarily."
"Well most of my enemies arn't in tune with multiple realms at the same time so whomever if tracking you down is obviousley powerful." Deadpool reclined in his chair and closed his eyes.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 13, 2013 10:39:50 GMT -5
Raziel climbed back on the roof and leaped over to the other alley.
"I have to get out of here!" Berry said running on the spot. "Are there any other exits? Do you have back door?"
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 13, 2013 18:53:26 GMT -5
"No just the one" Deadpool flipped a switch and a ticking sound could be heard on the air. "That trinket of yours is pretty cool though... I wonder if it's C4 proof?"
Lyra and Bon Bon were just getting out of the first alley so it would be some time before they reached the second alleyway.
OOC: I did this because Hidden Berry(I assume), Raziel and Deadpool would all survive this kind of explosion but Lyra and Bon Bon would be running down the alley right as it started to go off. Its just powerful enough to blow the cap off the sewer, not blow a hole in the alleyway. Plus the properties of this area give it a bit of a safehouse indestructability to it.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 13, 2013 19:19:08 GMT -5
ooc: Hidden berry will survive as long as she's in the spirit world.
"You're crazy!" Berry said and touched the trinket again, phasing out of the real world.
Raziel dropped into the alley, he phased into the spirit world and the ground lifted up underneath him as a sphere formed in it. The manhole cover also lifted into the air and was floating above the entrance because of the distortion of energy. Raziel slipped in beneath the manhole cover and landed in the room below. He could immediately see the purple pony standing in the whitewashed world. "There you are." He said pushing out an arm towards Berry. "Just stay calm, all I want is the Nosgoth returned, I wont hurt you."
Berry's eyes darted across the room as she searched for a way out.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 14, 2013 13:01:41 GMT -5
Deadpool jumped out of his chair and into the air. As he did it he put his hands under his chin, elbows outstreached and legs fluttering in the wind all like a ballerina. he said cheese as he floated right before the boom.
Lyra and Bon Bon were about half way to the manhole before the cap blew off the top and both of them jumped back screaming as it did.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 14, 2013 13:42:27 GMT -5
The shock from the blast warped the spirit world, the walls vibrating and the spikes in it retracting, the whole room became smaller. The sudden change in the spiritual distracted Raziel for a moment, but a moment is all that Berry needed. "Bye freak!" Berry said from behind Raziel as she jumped out of the room to the street above. Raziel spun around in surprise. "Ha!" Berry said as she ran down the alley, pushing the Nosgoth on her arm. She reappeared in the real world right in front of Lyra, and without any time to stop crashed into the detective, sending both of them to the ground. "Oh man! I've got to get used to that." A stunned Berry said.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 14, 2013 19:28:45 GMT -5
Bon Bon was shocked when the purple pony ran into Lyra out of nowhere. She popped a piece of candy real fast and the next thing you know Berry wasn't able to move, pinned to the wall by seemingly nothing. Her arms and legs were out at her sides preventing her from moving, even her hair seemed to be pulled towards the wall of the alley. "Who are you and what was that explosion?" Bon Bon questioned. Lyra was shaking her head after being thrown to the ground. Deadpool climbed out of the manhole and took a deep breath as he was about to give his monologue when the manhole cover came back down from it's flight smashing rather flat on his head and flattening him between the concrete and the metal. "haha rock and a hard place... I get it now" he mumbled from underneath it.
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 14, 2013 20:22:33 GMT -5
ooc: I can't let Raziel get the Nosgoth back just yet.
Raziel phased back into the real world standing with his spectral reaver sword drawn just a little away from the flattened Deadpool. He looked at the strange man and then at the detectives. "Did you see the purple pony?" He asked them. Through the commotion of Deadpool exiting Berry had disappeared from where she was trapped on the wall. Only feet away from them Berry was still stuck to the wall, but on the other side of it, inside a big storehouse with boxes scattered everywhere. "What did that chick do to me?" Berry thought to herself. Sweat dripping from her face and her mane was completely wet. "I can't move! Have to stay quiet until this wears off. Getting away took too much out of me." Her last thoughts died away as she fell unconscious, still stuck on the wall.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Jan 14, 2013 21:30:13 GMT -5
Deadpool, using his fingers, crawled back into the hole peeling off the cover as he fell in. Lyra was looking around frantically, "Where's the mare go? She needs to be questioned." "The spell I cast will be in effect for another 8 minutes or so and untill then she will be pulled to this wall. she seems to have teleported away but even then she will get pinned to whatever is between her and this wall. For now let's get Deadpool." She turned to the manhole.
OOC: Do you want me to break down the extent of Lyra and Bon Bon's powers or do you want me to slowly expose them as the story progresses?
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Post by Bio Plus on Jan 15, 2013 3:03:11 GMT -5
ooc: You can reveal them to me slowly, keep me on my toes. Raziel through his hand out to the side to show his frustration, since he was unable to show much emotion with his face. "Again she slips away!" He lifted the manhole cover and threw it to the side. "I will help you with this one." He told Lyra and Bon Bon.
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