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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 15:19:14 GMT -5
Bancho RP
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 15:22:18 GMT -5
Raider
Name: Alan Tale
Gender: Male
Personality: A dark cynical but ultimately fair person. He views the world in terms of survival and obtaining currency. He does not view anyone as being above another being due to their social standing and hates when someone is looked down upon for reasons beyond their control. He does not trust others easy. Despite obtaining currency he won't under any circumstances mug someone for it. He also doesn't like fighting people who can't defend themselves and won't kick others once they are down.
Abilities: Evasion based martial arts and stealth. He prefers to be untouchable. Hand crossbow marksmanship and Pistols as melee weapons in combat.
Other non-violent abilities: Nerd now how. An immense love of fiction. Pharmaceutical chemistry (He can make sedatives and stuff)
Description: Hair color: Brown Skin tone: Pale white like he's sickly. Eye color: Hazel Hair style: Bedhead Clothes: An unzipped black winter jacket and worn out jeans and sneakers he has gloves covered in scratches.
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Bio
Name: Axel
Gender: Male. (Both genders are male, finato)
Personality: Lay back with a short temper. He doesn't have time for friends and doesn't take responsibility. He'd rather just sit around wasting time then trying to make things better or change things. Despite this he hates his own personality and that he can't be more helpful, especially to his younger sister that takes care of him, but he doesn't do anything to change and just eccepts that he may as well just stick to the streets. He's jellous of those with a sense of justice and who tries to see the good in others and because of that usually ends up arguing or fighting with them.
Abilities: Master in own style of Extreme Martial Arts. Proficient in fighting with many kinds of weapons, including guns. Not good in caring for, maintaining, crafting or fixing said weapons. (Both characters have these abilities and they are not negotiable. They are street fighters, not blacksmiths or gunsmiths. They spend most of their time being badass, so they do not have the experience of being experts in anything else)
Other non-violent abilities: Cooking and figurine collecting.
Description: Axel has normal brown hair that's short and combed back. Brown non-interesting eyes with a dark hue beneath it from staying up too late. He has a small cut on his lip and an expression that's always sour. He wears plain, blue denim pants that has brown blotches from hanging around the streets and rips from fighting. Brown sneakers with short socks. And a long sleeved black shirt covered by a short denim jacket with skulls drawn on it to make it look tougher than it really is.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 15:36:16 GMT -5
It was almost ten o'clock in the night and the two boys were standing across each other, fire burning in their eyes. The alley they were standing in was almost completely dark, lit only by a flickering light and the lit windows from apartments far above them. Trash was lying all around them and the ground was wet and dirty. Alex cracked his knuckles. "How many times do I have to tell you not to walk in the same street as me?" He asked Alan. "I'm getting sick of you hanging around here. Tonight we settle this once and for all."
ooc: As a side note: The history between Alex and Alan is this. They meet each other, they smack talk and they fight. There's nothing beyond that and they don't know anything about each other accept that they're rivals.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 15:47:45 GMT -5
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 15:49:06 GMT -5
Alan spit at him. "Want some cough syrup? Give you a nice high chummer better then drugs. Less addictive. Maybe shut your mouth up a bit." Alan said calmly.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 16:20:13 GMT -5
"You think you're a funny guy? Let's see if you're laughing after this!" Alex launched forward and kicked Alan in the chest.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 16:34:44 GMT -5
Alan stepped back and kicked Axel on the side of his knee. "Shut up. You can't say anything happy or even amused. How the hell can you go through life? At least I got money and medicine bro. What you got?" Alan got into his kickboxing stance and put his guard up.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 16:41:42 GMT -5
Alex' leg buckled, but as he knelt to the ground he picked up a pipe, spun back up and with a horizontal sweep hit Alan in the ribs with the pipe.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 16:46:21 GMT -5
Alan grabbed the pipe once it hit and pulled in kneeing Axel in the stomach.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 16:50:56 GMT -5
Alex grabbed Alan's knee after he embedded it in his stomach. With his other hand he grabbed his shoulder and with one swift movement he lifted Alan off the ground and threw him at the opening of the allay. A girl had just turned into the alley and was almost hit by the flying Alan. She threw her back against the wall to avoid him and gave a scream.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 17:16:09 GMT -5
Alan got back up and bum rushed Axel with a flurry of well aimed punches.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 17:33:31 GMT -5
Alex returned the favor with punches of his own. The girl's screaming suddenly turned to anger. "You hooligans! Filth! Useless boys! How dare you almost hit me and then just ignore me!" She threw her hands up and there was a sudden explosion of smoke that covered the whole alley. "Maybe this stupid city would be better with you two stuck like that. Let that be a lesson to you!" The girl screamed and then in another puff of pink smoke she was gone. When the smoke finally cleared both Alan and Axel was lying dazed on their backs. The strange thing about it all was that Alan looked like this: And that Axel looked like this: They were fluffy and cute. But worst of all their bodies had lost all their strength. Their punches felt like cotton and their kicks like snowflakes. All their fighting potential and spirit was lost in these little bodies that hardly reached a normal person's knee. Alex groaned as he recovered from the daze. "What did you do?" He demanded from Alan, not noticing the changes that had taken place.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 17:47:22 GMT -5
"I think that homemade acid kicked in dude you look like a cat." Alan said.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 16, 2015 18:02:07 GMT -5
"I look like a cat?" Alex said shaking his head to clear it. "You look like a cat!" He stood up and for the first time got a good look at himself. "I do look like a cat!" He said shocked and pointed a finger towards Alan. "This is all your fault! Your drugs did this! Turn me back right now!"
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 16, 2015 19:15:56 GMT -5
"Dude I would never inject someone with anything more then a sedative! I'm not that intense! And how in the hell if you were high would you possibly be able to keep thus level headed. I know stuff that can reduce addiction but nothing that can reduce effect!" Alan pleaded.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 17, 2015 3:26:27 GMT -5
"How should I know! You're the acidbender here, not me!" Alex jumped forward and hit Alan in the face, but it did nothing and felt like a soft tap at most.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 17, 2015 8:31:40 GMT -5
"Ow. The pain." Alan said. "What the hell? Your completely weak now!" Alan said with a condescending smirk.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 17, 2015 8:42:35 GMT -5
ooc: Well, here we go. This is what you wrote in your Character Sheet. A dark cynical but ultimately fair person. He views the world in terms of survival and obtaining currency. He does not view anyone as being above another being due to their social standing and hates when someone is looked down upon for reasons beyond their control. He does not trust others easy. Despite obtaining currency he won't under any circumstances mug someone for it. He also doesn't like fighting people who can't defend themselves and won't kick others once they are down. You see those balded parts? You're character just turned into a cat and no normal person is just going to flow with it and those balded parts say that your character will not just flow with it either. There is no place in your Character Sheet that says your character is a drug addict or a surfer dude. And those are the only type of character I can place Alan at right now. So what the heck are you doing?
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 17, 2015 8:56:53 GMT -5
...Damnit! T-T I didn't even know I was wandering off. Look I'll keep my character sheet next to me. And not all the people who talk like that are surfers. Surfers talk much more... lingo-ish. Trust me.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 17, 2015 10:30:53 GMT -5
ooc: There are two archetypes that talk like that. Surfers and Drug Addicts. If he's not a surfer he's a druggie and a lot of your posts are veering towards that. So please redo your last post to show that he's more aware and cut the 'peace bro' attitude as it's not the kind of character you described.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 17, 2015 10:40:58 GMT -5
K edited.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 17, 2015 11:14:56 GMT -5
"Who the heck are you calling weak! I'm not weak!" Alex yelled punching him again and again with the same effect.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 17, 2015 20:27:22 GMT -5
Alan began punching if only just to test his own strength. "Hyah!" Alan yelled as his harmless punched landed one after the other.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Feb 18, 2015 1:19:30 GMT -5
OOC: Looking good. I will have to side with Bio on the accent bit. You're character comes off as a druggy hippy without a care in the world and violent tendencies. You seem to be correcting this alright, though. Mostly I'm posting so I can see when this thread is updated in my participated threads window.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 18, 2015 4:41:46 GMT -5
Alex backed off out of frustration. "That's it! My attacks may not get through to you, but let's see how your new body looks with a dent in it!" Alex ran to the pipe he used earlier and with some effort lifted it up. But before he could even think of swinging it at Alan an electric bolt blasted through his body and for a few seconds he looked like a Vegas billboard before falling to the ground. He was lying on his back, fur singed and sticking out in every direction.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 18, 2015 9:09:04 GMT -5
"Well I'm not sure what kind of dent your trying to give me but I'm pretty sure that hurt you more then it hurt me." Alan quipped.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 18, 2015 10:54:32 GMT -5
"Shut up. I will kill you." Alex said in pain, blowing smoke out as he said it. "Ha ha ha! Ha ha ha!" The laugh came from above them and sitting on one of the dumpsters was an old bum. He was laughing and slapping his knee at the two cats' expense. He was wearing torn brown pants, a filthy blanked and there was a flower in his messy hair. Or growing out of his hair, it was hard to tell.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 18, 2015 11:14:06 GMT -5
"See that guy gets it." Alan pointed at the man. "Wait does that mean we speak English still?"
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 18, 2015 14:17:51 GMT -5
"Of course not! Are you daft?" The old bum laughed. "Whoever heard of a cat that can talk!"
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 19, 2015 8:29:29 GMT -5
"Then how can you understand us?" Alan asked.
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