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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 11, 2015 16:42:35 GMT -5
...And the reaction to that would be?
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Feb 11, 2015 17:14:02 GMT -5
OOC: You need to post and see. The one main point of a roleplay is that you never really know how the other players characters will react. All you do is create s situation or scenario and the characters build the story themselves. You've just got to learn to be ok not knowing.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 11, 2015 17:14:17 GMT -5
ooc: I suppose that the girls now know that they were right about Team Gurran all along. Ninjad
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 11, 2015 17:16:24 GMT -5
Ok. I actually had a plan b for this sort of situation. But it's gonna have to involve Team Gurren escaping via knockout gas.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 11, 2015 17:17:34 GMT -5
ooc: Did you even read what Broly said?
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 11, 2015 17:29:01 GMT -5
No... I didn't even know he posted. I just posted this when I remembered I had a plan b
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 11, 2015 17:31:41 GMT -5
ooc: And did you read it now?
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 11, 2015 17:31:45 GMT -5
I see. Okay.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 11, 2015 17:50:49 GMT -5
Joseph took out his phone with a grim look on his face and dialed a number. "Hold please." He said to the others.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 2:23:25 GMT -5
ooc: just waiting for you
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 8:51:11 GMT -5
"7704." Joseph said. Team Gurren paled. "Yeah... okay.......... Sir? We have a 3.10. A 3.10. I'd like to think so they can see me right now. And hear me yes... would I be if it wasn't? Yeah. No no variables beyond... what?... WHAT?" Joseph listened for a second. "AND WHEN THE HELL IN THE BRIEFING WERE YOU PLANNING TO TELL US THAT?!" Joseph shouted. Sunset looked at Joseph. "Who are you talking to?!" Joseph held up his hand in the universal sign of "one sec". He handed the phone to Forge. "SON OF A #####! THEY SOLD US OUT!" Forge looked at Joseph before put the phone to his ear. "Authorization. General: Wind Oni 0042... this is he." Forge listened for a few minutes. "THAT WAS NOT MENTIONED IN THE BRIEFING. IF THAT WAS THE CASE WE WOULD HAVE SET UP DEFENSES AND AN INFORMATION NETWORK! YOU DID NOT SAY BODYGUARDS! WE WERE... SPLINTER CELL MY ### YOU SOLD US OUT... WELL DO WE KNOW WHO DID?" Forge listened. "Of course. Anything else we need to know? They gonna wake up tomorrow with knives on their chests? THIS IS SERIOUS!" Forge said. "No. No screw that. You tell him... they... HOW LONG HAVE YOU BEEN KEEPING THAT FROM US?" Forge just facepalmed. "Here? Okay." Forge handed the phone to Bio. "Its for you."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 11:01:17 GMT -5
ACK I DELETED YOUR POST BY ACCIDENT INSTEAD OF THE BAD I ONE I POSTED! STUPID TAPATALK!
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 11:01:32 GMT -5
I'm sorry. T-T
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 13:06:52 GMT -5
Bio took the phone, broke it with one hand and dropped the pieces on the floor. "Seems like there's a bad connection." He told Forge and spoke into his watch. "Fidget, I want you to lock all the doors except the one we came in. Also scramble all the electronics in here." "Will do Bio." Fidget's voice came back over the watch. "Their system isn't up to scratch, it was quite easy."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 15:08:18 GMT -5
Joseph smiled sadly. "No diplomacy. None. You should have listened to them. Now they think we are in life threatening danger." Joseph sat down at the table and took the money off. "Pack your things guys extraction should be here soon." Joseph said. Fluttershy was in tears. "What's going on Forge?" Forge looked ashamed but as he started to speak Joseph interjected. "We are part of an organization of spies who investigate the supernatural in order to find a way to travel between dimensions. We are called Bregean D'Aerthe. Kamina registered Team Gurren in order to pay for our living expenses in Japan. And to fulfill our dream of finding a home. Turns out we were supposed to be your bodyguards." Sunset laughed. "Guard us from what? This is the most ridiculous..." She was cut off as Joseph finished packing the computer and 3 white vans pulled outside the building with a screech. "Speak of the devil." 2 tuxedoed men walked out of one of the vans and made their way to the door. "They said they planted agents after Sunset went evil and it went viral. Remember when I initially called? It was an extraction code. A dozen armed men are outside Bio. Not to kidnap the girls but get us out. That phone you smashed might have helped your case that we aren't in life threatening danger. But that locked door wont. Unless Fidget is packing machine guns and is ready to kill all of them in which case you'd put a huge target on your back I suggest you unlock the doors."
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 15:17:35 GMT -5
"So you were spying on us this whole time!?" Rainbow asked. "We've got company." Fidget's voice came from the watch. The car moved in between the entrance and the two men, blocking them.
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Post by Broly Ultimatrix on Feb 12, 2015 15:20:53 GMT -5
OOC: Raider, you need to understand the importance of hitting that enter key. It helps the brain sort out the information and keep track of where the story changes location or character.
This:
Joseph smiled sadly. "No diplomacy. None. You should have listened to them. Now they think we are in life threatening danger." Joseph sat down at the table and took the money off. "Pack your things guys extraction should be here soon." Joseph said. Fluttershy was in tears. "What's going on Forge?" Forge looked ashamed but as he started to speak Joseph interjected. "We are part of an organization of spies who investigate the supernatural in order to find a way to travel between dimensions. We are called Bregean D'Aerthe. Kamina registered Team Gurren in order to pay for our living expenses in Japan. And to fulfill our dream of finding a home. Turns out we were supposed to be your bodyguards." Sunset laughed. "Guard us from what? This is the most ridiculous..." She was cut off as Joseph finished packing the computer and 3 white vans pulled outside the building with a screech. "Speak of the devil." 2 tuxedoed men walked out of one of the vans and made their way to the door.
should have been:
Joseph smiled sadly. "No diplomacy. None. You should have listened to them. Now they think we are in life threatening danger." Joseph sat down at the table and took the money off. "Pack your things guys extraction should be here soon." Joseph said. Fluttershy was in tears,(note I changed the period to a comma. Proper grammar) "What's going on Forge?" Forge looked ashamed but as he started to speak Joseph interjected, "We are part of an organization of spies who investigate the supernatural in order to find a way to travel between dimensions. We are called Bregean D'Aerthe. Kamina registered Team Gurren in order to pay for our living expenses in Japan. And to fulfill our dream of finding a home. Turns out we were supposed to be your bodyguards." Sunset laughed. "Guard us from what? This is the most ridiculous..." She was cut off as Joseph finished packing the computer and 3 white vans pulled outside the building with a screech. "Speak of the devil." 2 men in tuxedos (changed from tuxedoed men to men in tuxedos) walked out of one of the vans and made their way to the door.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 15:44:46 GMT -5
Sunset stood in front of Bio to make sure he didn't lunge. "Wait. Me and my friends deserve to know what's going on!" Applejack said. "How dare you act like you have the upper hand!" She went up to Joseph and smacked him. "Its because we do have the upper hand." Joseph said. Joseph was struck upside the head by Kamina knocking him unconscious. "Joseph. I forgive you for this. Your only trying to protect us in your own Joseph-y way but we've caused them enough trouble." Kamina said in Japanese. "A real man doesn't torture. And I've turned my back on my manly teachings enough for one life." Kamina said in English. "This is the division of 7! We have authorization to use harming force if necessary! Let the hostages go!" Said one of the men outside. "General Wind Oni is negotiating the release of the others! Give us 5 minutes!" Kamina said. There was a silence. "You have 4 then we break in! If our hackers sense anyone including the car attempting to call the police we will open fire knockout gas!" Forge sat down in the chair. "Simon. Mag. Go pack our things. Forge. Screw secrecy. We owe them answers. Answer any questions they have." Kamina said. He laid Joseph down and stood vigil so no one else would take a swing at him. "Okay. Ask away." Forge looked ashamed and lowered his head. "My bushido has failed. I should be killing myself but maybe this will feel as bad."
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 15:50:19 GMT -5
"Where's their journal?" Bio asked calmly. "Even if you run away we'll go after you until we find out where it is."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 15:57:10 GMT -5
"We don't know a rival faction took it. We aren't the only ones who know about the magic. They told me that someone who had EMP tech did it." Forge said.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 16:05:06 GMT -5
"Who else knows about their magic?" Bio asked.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 16:12:02 GMT -5
"Anyone who saw the video. He said. "What... you didn't take my journal?" Sunset asked. Forge said. "No." Forge said. "We were to spy and confirm a source of magic. No more no less. We weren't to take anything if it meant blowing cover or leaving a trail of any sort."
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 16:26:57 GMT -5
ooc: There is an unofficial rule in Hollywood, one that is quoted from Steven Spielburg. "Don't let in the press". It means that when you have a story that focuses on a group of characters, what they are doing, their feelings and what is important to them. That you should not bring in the news or world events that basically inserts the whole world in your story and completely decimates the focus on a small group of characters. You just did that. You just completely changed the whole tone of this story by making this an international situation which the girls can never escape from, turning this into some kind of cold war story.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 16:30:53 GMT -5
Ok. Not my intention. Hold on.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 16:31:35 GMT -5
Edited
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 16:39:48 GMT -5
"Do you believe them Sunset?" Bio asked.
ooc: Where are you going with this Raider? Is there a point to all this? Because you've given no clues to the whereabouts of the journal. Nothing. You're basically just telling Sunset to go search somewhere else and there is no somewhere else to search. You've removed Team Gurran from the story, are you going to bring them back in at some point? And how are you going to do it? And there's not much left to do, it's all just stopped now.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 17:11:15 GMT -5
Ooc: I'm going here.
Sunset looked at Forge. "Where might my journal be?" She asked. "I dunno. I have a few factions in mind but none that would openly start a covert war." Forge said. "You got any enemies?" Sunset looked at Forge unamused. "Im looking at one. But... hey wait... now that you mention it..." Sunset thought. "Hey wait yeah I do! But they couldn't be..." A loud voice shouted, "4 MINUTES ARE UP! ARE WE SQUARE?!" It shouted frantically. "Let them go Bio. I'm not saying they are innocent but I think I know someone a bit more desperate then them for magic." Sunset said. "Tell your friends you are staying." Sunset said as Forge gawked. "What?" Sunset stood up. "You said you were our bodyguards right? Plus I don't want you out of our sight or whistles get blown." Mag nearly laughed. "Your holding us hostage?" He asked incredulously. "Doesn't feel so nice huh?" Sunset said with a smirk. "WE ARE COMING IN!" Said the voice. Kamina nodded. "We accept." Kamina said quickly. "WAIT! FORGE NEEDS TO CALL HQ!" Forge just stared at Sunset. Then Kamina. "Why not start a fight?" He asked in Japanese. "Who says I'm not? I want the ###hole who framed us." Kamina replied. Forge nodded. He took out his phone and entered the bathroom.
16 minutes later. Forge exited visibly shaken. The men outside received text messages. They left along with the others in the vans.
"We are officially your hostages. Our orders still stand as our objective but otherwise we aren't aloud to pull what we just did again. Also if you whistleblow Team Gurren loses our funding... and... a great deal of favors had to be pulled so I'm screwed on bailing us out." Forge said with a gulp.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 12, 2015 17:16:07 GMT -5
ooc: *sigh*
"Fidget?" Bio said. "On my way." The car reversed out of the way, spun around and drove straight through one of the walls. The other two vehicles followed behind. "Alright, let's get out of here." Bio said. "Everyone climbed in." Rarity and Ever got into her car, Rainbow and Tornado on the bike and Pinkie jumped into Fidget.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 17:28:07 GMT -5
Wait...
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 12, 2015 17:28:22 GMT -5
I posted stuff...
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