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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 12:40:43 GMT -5
"We need to tell Twilight. This is serious. I'm not gonna underestimate these guys twice. I'm going to my house... can anyone come with me? I don't feel safe..." Sunset said sadly. "I'll go." Applejack said. Fluttershy spoke up. "We will all go. It's best we stick together."
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 9, 2015 14:59:50 GMT -5
"Agreed." Rainbow said and Rarity and Pinkie nodded.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 15:13:07 GMT -5
When they got to Sunset got to her apartment she gasped... the door had been kicked in. "I'VE BEEN ROBBED!" She screamed running inside.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 9, 2015 15:42:59 GMT -5
The rest followed her inside. "What did they take?" Rainbow asked.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 15:50:27 GMT -5
Sunset looked around. "Nothing. What the... look around everyone. Help me see what they took." Sunset went into her room
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 9, 2015 16:21:04 GMT -5
Rainbow, Rarity and Pinkie started to search the room and pick things up as they went.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 16:45:34 GMT -5
"THEY TOOK MY JOURNAL!" Sunset screamed. She ran out in a panic. She was red in the face and tears were rimming down her eyes. "Team Gurren took my journal..." She said.
The 4 members of Team Gurren sprung into action. Joseph deleted all his spy software and hid the copy software gigabyte USB in a compartment in his blade hilt. Forge hid all the weapons. Simon covered all windows. Kamina was pacing the floor and Mag was lookout. "CRAP WHEN THE TRANSMITTER STOPPED I DID NOT THINK IT WAS INTENTIONAL!" Viral was... PASSED OUT.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 9, 2015 17:01:14 GMT -5
ooc: Can you please explain what is happening, when, where and why, in the second paragraph, because I don't know.
Rarity hugged Sunset. "Don't worry, we'll figure something out." "Why would they take the journal?" Rainbow asked. There was a knock at the door. "Are you girls alright?" Bio asked from the door. "I heard the commotion and came over."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 17:27:31 GMT -5
Ooc: Joseph bugged the house remember?
"Team Gurren broke into my house and stole my journal!" Sunset said. "Im calling the police." Applejack said grabbing her phone.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 9, 2015 17:43:00 GMT -5
ooc: That doesn't explain what is happening in that paragraph.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 17:55:41 GMT -5
Joseph was listening to the bug and told the others. They reacted when Sunset accused them.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 9, 2015 18:07:52 GMT -5
ooc: It still does not explain some of their actions (hiding weapons, closing windows). It doesn't explain why and who said the last sentence. And it doesn't explain why Viral is passed out.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 18:11:21 GMT -5
Ok... repost... hold on.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 9, 2015 18:16:50 GMT -5
Joseph sedated Viral when he was sleeping so Team Gurren could spy in peace. Joseph was trying to solve a transmitter error when the transmitter starred working. He heard Sunset talk about getting robbed. "WE GOT A SITUATION!" He yelled. The others gathered.
"THEY TOOK MY JOURNAL!" Sunset screamed. She ran out in a panic. She was red in the face and tears were rimming down her eyes. "Team Gurren took my journal..." She said.
The 5 members of Team Gurren sprung into action knowing thry would get searched. Joseph deleted all his spy software and hid the copy software gigabyte USB in a compartment in his blade hilt. Forge hid all the weapons. Simon covered all windows. Kamina was pacing the floor and Mag was lookout. "CRAP WHEN THE TRANSMITTER STOPPED I DID NOT THINK IT WAS INTENTIONAL!" Viral was... PASSED OUT.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 1:38:59 GMT -5
ooc: That's better. But one more thing, we agreed to no weapons, so Joseph can't have a blade and thus can't hide the USB in its hilt.
Rarity hugged Sunset. "Don't worry, we'll figure something out." "Why would they take the journal?" Rainbow asked. There was a knock at the door. "Are you girls alright?" Bio asked from the door. "I heard the commotion and came over."
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 7:10:46 GMT -5
ooc: That's better. But one more thing, we agreed to no weapons, so Joseph can't have a blade and thus can't hide the USB in its hilt. Rarity hugged Sunset. "Don't worry, we'll figure something out." "Why would they take the journal?" Rainbow asked. There was a knock at the door. "Are you girls alright?" Bio asked from the door. "I heard the commotion and came over." Dude... Forge is a swordsman and Mag Uses Yoyos. Simon has his special drills too. I thought you said it would be OK as long as they were non lethal...
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 7:13:43 GMT -5
We agreed a long time ago... I thought. I remember this argument going on forever...
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 7:33:27 GMT -5
ooc: A blade is not non-lethal and neither are weapons you hide away. It implies that they are very lethal. And we agreed on Simon's drills, but they can't change size.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 7:59:02 GMT -5
...aw... Okay but Mag keeps his Yoyos and Joseph his hand crossbow. They were already in the story and you didn't object.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 8:04:08 GMT -5
ooc: Wait, where was his hand crossbow in the story?
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 8:32:36 GMT -5
When Joseph planted the bug.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 8:37:24 GMT -5
ooc: It just says that he shot a disguised bolt into their room, not what he used. You can keep the hand crossbow, but it can't shoot real bolts.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 8:46:35 GMT -5
No he uses it for other purposes.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 8:48:43 GMT -5
"Team Gurren stole Sunset's journal!" Applejack exclaimed.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 8:51:28 GMT -5
"Do you need any help?" Bio asked.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 9:16:57 GMT -5
"Yeah... I need you to go with me to get it back." Sunset said.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 15:11:13 GMT -5
"Sure. I can do that." Bio told her. "Wait, you're going after them?" Rainbow asked. "I don't know if that's a good idea." Pinkie said.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 15:30:19 GMT -5
Sunset wiped her tears. "That journal is my only link to one of my close friends. They've gone too far this time. And once I get it back I'm calling the police." Sunset said.
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Post by Bio Plus on Feb 10, 2015 16:19:27 GMT -5
"It's just that you're more important than he journal." Rainbow said. "And I'm sure we can get a new one from Twilight." Rarity argued.
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Post by Raiderjoseph on Feb 10, 2015 16:21:25 GMT -5
"How will we contact her? Besides I can't just let them get away with it." Sunset said.
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